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??考研英语（二）小作文：戳—》考研小作文点题+预测
【资料使用说明】
首先，拿到大作文文后，务必审题，关注“英文指令+图表+文字说明”等关键要素。当图表中数字较多时，务必通过文字说明来判断主要数据是什么。
系统班同学的作文背写主要是复习，建议按照：抄写范文—英译汉—汉译英—对比查错—再背写出错之处或全文；
数量至少五篇，其他背不完的，建议背写一下生词就可以了。
么么哒，记住：真题范文中重复的表达是重中之重，因为既然能重复写五次作文，很有可能帮你完成即将到来的第六次考研写作。
非系统班同学建议：先熟练背诵一篇，然后再通读其他作文找出其中重复的表达，加以背写即可。背写方法同上。
必须看：命题趋势剖析
图表的形式只是表象，图表描述的本质只有两种：相同事物写变化+不同事物写对比（排序）：
如：相同事物写变化（上升、下降、稳定）
2010? 发展中国家和发达国家手机销售 ??
（柱状图：市场）
2011? 国产、日系美系品牌汽车市场份额
（柱状图：市场）
2013? 中国城镇人口变化 ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
（柱状图：社会）
再如：不同事物写对比（排序）：
2012? 某公司员工满意度调查 ? ? ? ? ? ? ??
（表格：职场）
2014? 某高校大学生兼职情况对比??? ????
（柱状图：学生）
2015? 我国某城市居民春节期间花销比例???
（饼形图：社会）
2016? 某高校学生旅行目的调查
???????????
（饼形图：学生）?????? ???
可见，大作文的图表描述确实有重复性。
尤其值得注意的是：2015、2016的大作文都是饼形图且话题也有重复性。
因此建议掌握如下5大范文即可。
建议：
务必背写其中重复性的表达，非重复性的表达建议背写生词即可。此外，如果实在背写不下五篇，则重点搞定一篇但建议背写其他文章的关键词和生词。
么么哒，爱你，希望你坚持到底。考研必过400分。
推荐必备5篇作文+话题关键词
1. 表格：人口老龄化（相同事物写变化）
write an essay based on the following chart. in your writing, your should
(1)??? interpret the chart, and
(2)??? give your comment.
you should write about 150 words on the answer sheet.
中国老龄化人口趋势
中国老龄化人口趋势
【范文】
? ? ?given is a table that clearly illustrates the striking trend of aged population in china from 1990 to 2050. during the first 22 years, the number of people aged 60 and above ascended slightly from 97.19 to 136 million, and since 2012 it is predicted that this number will surge remarkably, reaching 410 million in 2050. meanwhile, the proportion of aged citizens revealed and will reveal the similar trend, and it 
will reach 27.4% in total population.
（二段版本一：分析老龄化社会问题和挑战）
? ? ?such a scenario can be naturally associated with various problems in aging society. for one thing, aging society is best characterized by the more burden for youngsters to support parents, which will enable younger generation to work harder. for another, compared with the past and today, the aged citizens will play a more important role in society. a case in point is their age for retiring will be extended. therefore, a larger proportion of senior citizens have to take more responsibilities in work, family and society.?
? ? ?accordingly, it is advisable for chinese government to focus more eyesight on the coming challenges in the forthcoming future. meanwhile, it is essential for china to work out comprehensive strategies to strengthen its social welfare to reduce young people’s stress.
此外二段还可以分析老龄化社会原因（段落范文如下）
? ? ?such a scenario can be naturally associated with various problems in aging society, but what resulted in this change above? for one thing, the past 30 years was best characterized by the policy of family plan in china, which enabled a host of families to have only one kid and enabled the proportion of youngsters to decline. for another, compared with the past, medical care and quality of life is and will be better; therefore, a larger proportion of people live longer. consequently, the percentage of aged people showed and will show a trend of rise.??
【译文】
??? 所给是一个表格，清晰展示了中国老龄人口从1990年到2050年的明显趋势。在最初的22年中，60岁以上的人口数量从9719万缓慢增长至1.36亿；自2012年之后，据估计这个数字将飙升，并在2050年达到4.1亿。同时，老龄人口的比例也表现出并且将表现出类似趋势，将达到总人口的27.4%
??? 这样的场景能自然联系到社会老龄化的各种问题。一方面，老龄社会典型特征将是年轻人更多的养老负担，这将使年轻一代更辛苦。另一方面，与过去和今天相比，老年人将在社会中发挥更重要的作用。典型例子就是他们的退休年龄将会延迟。因此，一大部分老年人不得不承担更多家庭、工作和社会责任。
? ? 因此，中国政府应更多关注未来的挑战。同时，中国应制定出综合性策略来提升社会福利并减轻年轻人的压力。
? ? 此外二段还可以分析老龄化社会原因
? ? 这样的场景能自然联系到社会老龄化的各种问题，但什么导致以上变化？一方面，过去的30年计划生育政策是个突出特征，这使得很多家庭只有一个孩子，也使得年轻人的比例下降。另一方面，于过去相比，今天的医疗和生活质量更好，将来也会持续更好。因此，很多人们寿命延长。因此，老龄人口的比重表现出并将继续表现出上升趋势。
the old/the elderly/elderly people/the senior/senior citizens/the aged/aged people
aging society 老龄化社会
aging of population人口老龄化
filial piety 孝道
fulfill filial duty/show filial piety to parents/practice filial piety 尽孝
support (take care of, sustain) aged parents (the old and infirm parents/the old/the aged/the elderly/the senior/senior citizens) 赡养老年人
show solicitude for parents 关心父母
2. 表格（饼状图）：大学生阅读偏好（不同事物写对比）
directions: in this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following diagram. in your writing, in your writing, you should
1. describe the diagram and
2. analyze the possible causes.
you should write at least 150 words.
?注意：该图虽然是表格，但只要你听过课，你一定知道闪图中的数字相加=100%， 可以转化成饼形图。
【参考范文】
?? this is a table, which clearly demonstrates the striking contrasts among the book circulations of four categories in a certain library. overall, the circulation of popular fiction shows the highest percentage, which reaches 65.9%. then, the next is general nonfiction, with 18.2% followed by the circulation of science and technology books, at 10.8%. finally come the circulation of books of art, literature and poetry, with 5.1%.
? ? to my best understanding, there are several reasons accounting for these differences. to begin with, popular fictions are usually characterized by their colorful plots, romantic love or humorous language style, which attract a host of youngsters and enable readers to relive pressure from academic pursuit. in addition, compared with popular fictions, professional books of science and technology, art, literature and poetry are more difficult to understand; thus, only a small proportion of students majoring in these fields need to borrow related books from the library.
? ? ?as a college student, i am convinced that it is of great necessity for young people to read not only popular fictions, but also other books. no matter what you read, books always bring us knowledge, arouse our enthusiasm for study and help us to enhance ourselves.
以下话题词，请快速浏览并筛选出生词记忆
education 教育
schooling 学校教育
life-long education 终身教育
compulsory education 义务教育
exam/test-oriented(driven) education 应试教育
education for all-round development 素质教育
well-rounded development of a child 全面发展
balanced development of a child 均衡发展
promote the student’s physical, mental(intellectual) and emotional development
3. 柱状图：汽车市场格局（相同事物写变化）
write a short essay based on the following chart. in your writing, you should:
1) interpret the chart and???????? 2) give your comments
you should write at least 150 words
?2008、2009年国内轿车市场部分【品牌份额示意图】
【参考范文】
? ? given is a column chart that clearly illustrates the dramatic changes/ striking contrasts in the china’s market share among chinese, american and japanese automobile brands between 2008 and 2009. during the period, the share of chinese brands ascended remarkably, reaching its peak at approximately 33%, while the sale of japanese brands revealed a sharp decline, from the largest proportion at 35% to 25%. meanwhile, the percentage of american brands remained stable at 15%. (73 words)
? ? ? (such a scenario can be naturally associated with the fierce competition in china’s car market, but) what resulted in the differences above? to my understanding, there are at least two fundamental causes accounting for this phenomenon. for one thing, chinese automobiles are best characterized by the lower prices and improved quality, which enabled/attracted more chinese customers to choose their national brands. for another, compared with chinese and us brands, there were more problems with japanese cars’ quality/safety (, and a case in point is toyoto); therefore, a larger proportion of individuals did not subscribe/purchase japanese brands. consequently, japanese brands showed a trend of decline in market share. (107 words)
? ? ? accordingly, it is advisable for chinese manufacturers to focus more eyesight on the domestic market. meanwhile, it is essential for them to work out comprehensive strategies to maintain or strengthen their quality and service. (if they try their utmost to do so, the future of china’s auto industries will be hopeful and promising). (56 words) ?
【参考译文】
? ? ? 所给是一个柱状图，清晰展示了2008和2009年的中、美、日系汽车品牌在中国汽车市场的份额明显差异。在这段时间，中国品牌的份额明显上升，达到最高值约33%，而日系品牌的销售表现出急剧下降的趋势，从最大的份额35%降到25%。同时，美系品牌的比例稳定在15%。
? ? ? 这样的场景能自然联系到中国汽车市场的激烈竞争，然而什么导致了以上差异？在我看来，至少两个根本原因可以解释该现象。一方面，中国汽车这几年显著特征就是低价和质量的提升，这使得更多中国消费者选择自己的民族品牌。另外一方面，与国产和美系车相比，日系车的质量和安全出了更多问题，典型例子就是丰田。因此，一大部分人不再购买日系品牌。结果，日系品牌的份额表现出下降。
? ? ?因此，中国汽车制造商应更关注国内市场。同时，他们应制定综合性策略维持或提升汽车的质量和服务。如果他们能全力以赴，中国汽车产业的明天将充满希望。
4. 线状双图：野生动物保护（相同事物写变化）
write an essay based on the following chart. in your writing, your should
(1)??? interpret the chart, and
(2)??? give your comment.
you should write about 150 words on the answer sheet.
? ? ? given are two line graphs that clearly illustrate the striking relation between illegal hunting and the extinction of species in a certain region of west china from 1963 to 2003. during the first two decades, the number of illegal hunting ascended slightly, and since 1983, it surged remarkably, reaching its peak at 80 in 2003; the extinction revealed a similar trend with the hunting, and the number of extinction reached the peak in 2003.
? ? ?such a scenario can be naturally associated with the significance of protecting wildlife, but what resulted in the serious situation? for one thing, illegal hunting was best characterized by its huge economic profits from animals’ fur, meat and bones, which enabled some criminals to risk to break the law. for another, compared with the past, the damage to ecosystem became more serious because of illegal hunting; therefore, a larger proportion of meat-eating and plant-eating animals died and disappeared in this region.
? ? ? accordingly, it is advisable for the local government to focus more eyesight on the protection of wildlife. meanwhile, it is essential for them to work out comprehensive strategies to strengthen sustainable development/ environmental protection. (191 words)
以下话题词，请快速浏览并筛选出生词记忆
人与环境
protect/preserve the environment/the preservation of environment 保护环境=环境保护
destroy/destruct/ruin/devastate the environment/ the destruction of environment? 破坏环境=环境破坏
environmental degradation/environmental deterioration/the deteriorating environment? 环境恶化
人与资源
conserve water/water conservation
consume water/water consumption
water shortage=shortage (scarcity/dearth) of water
科技环境与现代生活
网络、手机、电脑、游戏
the internet/the virtual net/the virtual world/the virtual net world /the cyber space
information superhighway
with the advent/dawn of the internet (era/age)
the widespread/extensive use of the internet
a global village
online shopping/banking
chat/shop/book online
make friends online
online gossip
交通：
traffic jam/congestion, heavy traffic 交通堵塞
morning and evening peak 早晚高峰
rush hour 交通高峰期
traffic control 交通管制
car-free day 无车日
private cars 私家车
develop public transport 发展公共交通
5. 饼形图：市场投资（不同事物写对比）
北京市场投资
write an essay based on the following chart. in your writing, your should
(1)??? interpret the chart, and
(2)??? give your comment.
you should write about 150 words on the answer sheet.
?1978-2008北京市场投资调查表
? ? ?given is a pie chart which clearly illustrates the striking contrasts in investment from different countries and regions in beijing from 1978 to 2008. overall, investment by hong kong had the largest proportion, which accounted for 44%; then next was japan with 19.2%, followed by u.s.a at 16%; finally came investment from other 23 countries and regions, constituting 20.8%.
? ? ?such a scenario can be naturally associated with the huge potential of beijing market, but what resulted in this phenomenon? for one thing, the past 30 years in china was best characterized by its policy of open and reform, which enabled beijing to have more opportunities to attract foreign funds. for another, compared with other nations, hong kong enjoyed a closer cooperation and relation with beijing, especially after 1997; therefore, a larger proportion of investment came from hong kong.
? ? ? accordingly, it is advisable for beijing government to focus more eyesight on investment from hk corporations. meanwhile, it is essential for beijing to work out comprehensive strategies to attract more funds from other nations.
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做一件让自己感动和怀念的事情
我能做的就是陪伴你
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