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若何写好中高考英语作文？
1、布局要清楚布局清楚这点真的很首要，咱们都晓得，阅卷教员们要在划定的时候内批阅上千份作文，而清楚的布局，会让阅卷教员一目明了，天然就会喜好你的作文。甚么布局好呢？那就是三段式。第一段要开宗明义，直接拿出主题。给大师举个例子，好比，写我的妈妈，第一段直接就说 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明白本身的概念。第二段就要说，她为甚么是一个好妈妈。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 具体说出妈妈的长处。第三段得出结论。大师可以颁发本身的概念，也能够提出建议和但愿。如，I love my mother. I love my family！
2、时态要正确英语作文除布局，另有一个是阅卷教员最敏感的，那就是时态，这也是一篇作文是不是得高分的关头。要明白文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再按照内容请求，现肯定事变是曩昔已产生仍是将来行将产生，好比记述一件事要用一般曩昔时；写常常产生的事或对人物的描述，要用一般如今时；对付将来的向往要用一般未来时；曩昔的@事%HmE87%变对如%3i542%今@酿成的影响或曩昔持续到如今的状态都用如今完成时。必定不克不及乱花乱配。
3、短语应用要机动同窗们在写作文的时辰，要尽可能利用有掌控的词，防止不需要的失分。固然，定语从句、宾语从句等句型，在关头的时辰用上一两个，会
增加你文章的文彩。在英语中存在不少简略又能表达不少意思的短语。这些短语的应用可使作文加倍原汁原味。
4、写全要点比年的各地高考英语提醒性作文比力多，也就是说写作内容几近都有要点提醒，切当地说就是给出写作提纲，这类作文，同窗们必定记着不要逐字翻译，可是提醒点必需在文章中有所表现。文章写得再好，若是缺乏了要点就会扣分的。以是要点也就是文章的第二段内容，同窗们要把提醒点写全，然后环抱提醒点充实阐扬，丰硕本身所写的内容。
5、是非句原则事情还得一张一弛呢，老让阅卷教员读长句，累死人！写一个短小精炼的句子，相反，却可以起到一语道破的感化。并且若是咱们把短句放在段首或段末，也能够揭露主题：As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如斯可见，是非句连系，顿挫抑扬，岂不爽哉？服膺！强烈建议：在文章第一段（开首）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部门，要先用一个短句诠释重要意思，然后在论述几个要点的时辰采纳先短后长的句群情势，定会让主体部门妙笔生辉！文章末端一般用一长一短便可以了。
7、一二三原则带领发言老是第一部门、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部门、第一点…如斯罗嗦。可究竟结果仍是层次清晰。阅卷教员们看文章也必定要经由过程这些关头性的“标签”来断定你的文章是不是布局清晰，层次天然。破解法子很简略，只要把下面任何一组的辞汇参加到你的几个要点前就清晰了。1）first, second, third, last（不举荐，缘由：俗）2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不举荐，缘由：俗）3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不举荐，缘由：俗）4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不举荐，缘由：俗）5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈举荐）6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈举荐）7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈举荐）8）most important of all, moreover, finally9）on the one hand, on the other hand（合用于两点的环境）10）for one thing, for another thing（合用于两点的环境）建议：不但仅在写作中注重，日常平凡措辞的时辰也应当层次清晰！
8、短语优先原则写作时，特别是在测验时，若是利用短语，有两个益处：其1、用短语会使文章增长亮点，若是教员们看到你的文章太简略，看不到一个本身不熟悉的短语，必定会看你低一等。相反，若是发明亮点—出色的短语，那末你的文章定会得高分了。其2、关头时刻思惟短路，只有凑字数，怎样办？用短语是一个法子！好比：I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.如许字数较着增长，表达也更正确。
9、 多实少虚原则缘由很简略，写文章仍是应当写一些现实的工具，不要废话连篇。这就请求必定要多用实词，罕用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比力大的词。好比咱们说一个很好的时辰，不该该之说nice如许浮泛的词，应当利用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted之类的形象词。再好比：走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room可是小偷走出房间应当说：slip out of the room蜜斯走出房间应当说：sail out of the room小孩走出房间应当说：dance out of the room白叟走出房间应当说：stagger out of the room以是多用实词，罕用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！
附20篇含中国元素的英语范文
一. 太极假设你是李华，你的英国网友Forbes筹算抽暇到中国粹习太极(Tai Chi)，他写信向你乞助，请你按照以下要点给对方写一封回信：1.先容学太极益处；2.卖力接洽进修地址和教员；注重:1.词数100摆布。2.可得当增长细节,以使行文联贯。Dear Forbes,It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon. I’ m quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly.Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives.Concerning your learning location and instructor, I’m so proud to tell you that I have the ability to reco妹妹end the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country. As a result, you can rely on me.Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
二. 羊毫书法假如你是李华，在美国孔子学院的笔友Jack对汉字羊毫书法很是感乐趣，写信向你咨询进修羊毫书法的建议。请你用英语回信，内容包含：1. 进修羊毫书法的必备东西;2. 你认为学好羊毫书法的有用方法；3. 学好羊毫书法的益处。注重：1. 词数100摆布（开首和末端已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 可以得当增长细节,以使行文联贯。3. 参考辞汇：书法 calligraphy 羊毫 writing brush 砚台 ink stoneDear Jack,I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese Calligraphy. It’s my pleasure to tell you how to learn Chinese calligraphy.As we all know, the four treasures of the study are writing brush, ink, paper and ink stone, which are essential to learn Chinese calligraphy. As to the way to learn it, I think, for one thing, you may study the basic structure of each Chinese character step by step；for another, choosing a good model book to copy is of great benefit to you.Chinese calligraphy is a fine art of the excellent traditional cultures in China. Not only does it do good to health, but also it can cultivate morality and purify our souls.Hoping you can come to China to enjoy it personally.
Yours,
Li Hua
三. 同享单车假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋侪Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近呈现的一种同享单车“mobike”很感乐趣，并请你做个扼要先容。请你给Jim回信，内容包含：1. 这类单车的利用法子（如：APP检察车辆、扫码开锁等）；2. 这类单车的上风；3. 你对这类单车的见解。注重: 1. 词数很多于80；2. 开首和末端已给出，不计入总词数。提醒词：智妙手机 smartphone, 二维码 the QR codeDear Jim,I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter.It’s very convenient to use if you have a smart phone. What you do is find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip. Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
四. 针言故事假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信向你扣问汉语针言“揠苗助长”的寄义。请你按照下面的汉语提醒用英语给Mike写封回信，向其诠释该针言的由来和意义。宋人有闵其苗之不长而揠之者，芒芒然归，谓其人曰，“本日病矣，予助苗长矣。”其子趋而往视之，苗则槁矣。注重：1.词数100摆布；2.可以得当增长细节，以使行文联贯；3.开首和末端已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mike,It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese literature. The set phrase you asked me means Trying to help seedlings grow by pulling them up. There is a story behind it.A man in the Song State was anxious about the slow growth of his seedlings. One day, he went to the field and pulled them upward one by one. He came back tired and said to his family, “I’m exhausted today, for I have helped the seedlings grow much taller all at once.” Hearing this, his son ran to look at the seedlings. To his horror, all of them had dried up and died.This set phrase means that growing against the law of development in things and being overanxious for quick results will make things worse.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua五. 中国结假设你是李华，便宜了一些中国结。给开网店的美国朋侪Tom写封信，请它代卖，要包含：1.外观（尺寸.色彩.质料）2.意味意义3.代价注重:1.100词摆布2.可以得当增长细节,以使行文联贯3.开首为你写好Dear Tom,How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only 12.99 US each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also,do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!Yours,Li Hua六. 进修中文假设你是李华，你的英国朋侪Peter来信向你咨询若何才能学好中文。请跟据以下要点写封回信。1. 加入中文进修班; 2.看中文书刊、电视; 3.学唱中文歌曲; 4.交中国朋侪。注重：1. 词数150摆布; 2. 可得当增长细节; 3. 开首语已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peter ,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua七. 朗读经典假设你是学生会主席李华，学生会筹算举行中华经典文学朗读勾当，请按照如下信息写一份英文通知。1. 时候：报名截至时候5月20日；勾当时候：5月30日下战书3:00—5:002. 地址：黉舍演讲厅3. 内容和情势：小我或小组朗读中华经典文学作品4. 奖项：评出前十名颁奖注重：1. 词数100摆布：2. 可以得当增长细节，以使行文联贯。信中不克不及呈现本人相干信息。参考辞汇：中华经典文学朗读 Chinese Classics RecitingNOTICEIn order to improve the students’spoken Chinese and encourage them to read more Chinese classics, a Chinese Classics Reciting contest among the students will be held in the school lecturehall from 3 p.m to 5 p.m on 30th May. It is organized by the Student Union. Those who want to take part in the contest, please sign up in the Student Union office before May 20th. The contesters should recite Chinese classics individually or in a group. The first 10 winners will be given prizes. Everyone is welcome to participate in it.TheStudent UnionMay 10, 2016八. 先容古代诗人假如你是李华，你的美国朋侪Tom在来信中提到对中国唐诗感乐趣，并哀求你先容一名你最喜好的唐朝诗人。请你给Tom回信，内容包含诗人简介及你喜好他的缘由。注重：1. 词数100摆布；2. 可以得当增长细节，以使行文联贯。Dear Tom,I’m glad to hear from you. I feel proud knowing you are interested in Tang poems.As for my favorite poet, it must be Li Bai. Living in a golden age of Chinese poetry, Li Bai is best known for his rich imagination and striking imagery in his poety, as well as for his great love for liquor. Many of his poems will remain today. Li Bai is regarded as the greatest romantic poet of the Tang Dynasty.What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages. They convey his strong love for nature, friends and the people.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua九. 先容中国画假设你是李华。你的美国朋侪David生日将至，你画了一幅中国画“竹”，作为生日礼品寄送给他。请你写一封信，阐明其寄意并暗示祝愿。注重：1. 词数100摆布；2. 可得当增长细节，以使行文联贯。Dear David :How’s everything going? As your birthday is drawing near, I’ve prepared a gift for you. It’s a Chinese painting “bamboo”, which I specially drew for you.In Chinese culture, bamboo carries many best wishes and excellent qualities. On one hand, it stands straight and stays green all year round, so it’s always full of life. I wish you as strong and energetic as a bamboo. On the other hand, it’s hard outside but hollow inside. If compared to a bamboo, one is usually considered to be strong-willed and modest. All in all, we use bamboo to represent a noble and gentle person.I hope you like the gift and wish you a happy birthday.Yours,Li Hua十. 茶文化按照如下要点提醒写一篇题为 Chinese tea 的漫笔，向外国朋侪先容中国的茶文化。
It is 4,000 years since the Chinese began to grow and drink tea.There’re many kinds of tea in China, of which Longjing Tea is famous all over the world. Tea is usually drunk in tea sets. A tea set is made up of a tea pot and some teacups, which are both made of china.Most Chinese are fond of drinking tea. Tea is served not only at tea house and restaurants but also at home. People also drink tea during breaks at offices or factories. It has been discovered that drinking tea does a lot of good to people’s health.A cup oftea can make you relaxed and refreshed. And it’s said that green tea can prevent cancers. That’s why tea is becoming more and more popular with people.十一. 中国传统乐器古筝假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter对中国传统乐器很感乐趣，写信请你向他先容一款中国传统乐器，请按如下提醒给Peter写一封回信，先容中国传统乐器——古筝。1. 古筝是最古老的中国传统乐器之一，有2500多年汗青；2. 古筝是拨弦乐器，初期有5根弦，成长至今有21-25根弦；3. 古筝音色圆润清澈，音域宽阔，有“东方钢琴”的美称；4. 随信附寄一张古筝乐曲光盘。注重：1. 词数100摆布；2. 可以得当增长细节，以使行文联贯；3. 开首语和竣事语已给出，不计入总词数。参考辞汇：the Chinese Zither 古筝；plucked instruments 拨弦乐器；string 琴弦；sonorous 圆润低落的；the Chinese piano 东方钢琴Dear Peter,I have gladly received your letter telling me that you’re interested in traditional Chinese musical instruments. Now, I’d like to tell you something about the Chinese Zither, one of the most ancient Chinese musical instruments with a long history of over 2500 years.The Chinese Zither is a plucked instrument and is played with both hands. In the early times it had 5 stringsand has developed into 21 to 25 strings up to now.The Chinese Zither has a wide range and sonorous sound. As its playing appears and sounds like playing the piano,the Chinese Zither is sometimes called “the Chinese piano”.Enclosed with the letter is a CDof masterpieces of the Chinese Zither. I hope you’ll enjoy it.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua十二. 中国象棋假设你是李华，你的美国网友Peter加入中国象棋收集挑战赛得到了一等奖。请按照如下提醒写一封英文电子邮件向他暗示庆祝。1. 庆祝他获奖；2. 必定他支出的尽力；3. 扣问什么时候便利，在网上商讨棋艺。注重：1. 词数100摆布；2. 可以得当增长细节，以使行文联贯；3. 开首和末端已给出，不计入总词数。DearPeter,I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.“Everything comes to him who waits.”For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinses chess contest. Finally, you succeeded in wining the online competition!So I’m so happy that you become the champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.Congratulations again.Yours,Li Hua十三. 京剧假设你是李华，你想约请在中国留学的英国老友Peter旁观京剧演出，但Peter不在家，你给他写张留言条，包含如下内容：1. 你到Peter家的目标；2. 先容京剧；3. 扣问何时便利，再约时候旁观。注重：1. 词数100摆布；2. 可以得当增长细节，以使行文联贯。参考辞汇：quintessence 菁华，精炼；ornate 富丽的Dear Peter,I came to see you but you were out. I’d like to invite you to see Beijing Opera with me next week, since you have always wanted to know more about Chinese culture since the first day to China.With a history of nearly 200 years, Beijing Opera is a form of traditional Chinese theatre, which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture. The performers in ornate costume perform various stories that happened in history to audience by singing, dance and motions. I can tell you more about it when we meet.Please let me know when you will be free and I will buy the tickets in advance. I sincerely hope that you can accept my invitation and I’m sure you’ll enjoy it.Yours,Li Hua十四. 传统文化正消散话题：1.如今很多传统文化正渐渐消散2. 传统文化消散的缘由3. 我的见解On the losing of traditional cultureIt’s widely noted that lots of traditional cultures are disappearing along with the development of technology. Many ancient architectures and traditional ways of living have been deserted. It seems that the traditional culture and craftsmanship will be replaced in this modern era.The following reasons can account for the above phenomenon. Firstly, traditional technologies are always considered ineffective while the new sciences are always highly efficient, because modern science and technology facilitate both our daily and academic life a lot, with which we can save much money and time. Secondly, it is costly to protect the traditional culture, especially the maintenance and repair of the historical buildings.In my opinion, although traditional culture is an ancient heritage, it couldn’t keep pace with the development of society. It is the tide of history that the traditional culture and technology will no doubt be eliminated in the end.十五. 校园里的各类“星”角逐1.校园里也出现出了各类选“星”角逐2.这类征象带来的问题3.你的见解My view on the “Campus Star” ContestAt an age of character and individuality being encouraged and demonstrated, we see various “stars” pop up—singing stars, dancing stars, movie stars and sport stars. etc. Many schools even hold contests to choose their “Campus Stars”. Although these activities make our cultural life in campus more colorful and various, a lot of problems spring up at the same time.First of all, these activities can result in the swelling of vanity in some students, making them become arrogant, or even feel superior to other students. Moreover, these activities can greatly distract the students from their study. In order to become a star, they will, without any doubt, spend a lot of time and energy on the preparation and competition. The focus of their academic life will be shifted, and even worse, they become too enthusiastic about extracurricular activities and hate the academic knowledge ad skills they need to grasp for their future development.On the whole, I think these various “ Campus Star” contests should be controlled in the campus. After all, schools are different from any other social institutions. Extracurricular activities should be encouraged, but they should be helpful to the students’ academic study and all-round development.十六. 幸福感话题：How to enhance the sense of happiness1. 人们对付若何晋升幸福感有分歧见解2. 幸福感晋升不但包括物资层面，也指……The sense of happiness is of great significance. As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future. However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several other aspects. Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love. Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness. It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.As a student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness. To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizons and cultivate their ability.十七. 文明游览每一年都有很多人外出游览，一些人的不文明举动引发了社会的遍及存眷。某英文报社正在举办以“文明游览”为主题的会商。假设你是李华，请你给报社写一封信，号令大师做文明旅客。要点以下：1．尊敬风俗；2．不大声鼓噪； 3．其他。注重：1．词数100摆布；2．可以得当增长细节，以使行文联贯；3．开首和末端语已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Editor,I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. Every year, a great many holiday makers go out for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries.More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.Yours trulyLi Hua十八. 庇护中国传统文化某中学生英文报就“庇护中国传统文化”为主题举办英语征文勾当。你筹备给该报投稿，稿件内容包含：1. 庇护中国传统文化的首要性2. 罗列1-2个你所晓得的国度或本地当局文化庇护的事例;3. 谈谈你对文化庇护的建议。字数请求：120字。Protect Traditional Chinese CultureThe protection of national and folk culture is of great significance to Chinese cultural diversity and also to the harmonious development between local economic and social development. It is reported that the Guangdong government pays special attention to protecting Chaoju(潮剧)， a local drama born in Chaozhou in the eastern Guangdong province.In my opinion, some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture effectively. To start with, we should make a law to regulate the society’s performance. Besides, we should draw more people’s attention to it, for the more they know about the importance of culture protection, the stronger support we can get from the public.In a word, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture.十九. 北京胡同假设你叫李华，近来你的美国笔友Tony要来北京体验中国传统文化，请按照他的问题复兴邮件，为他设计北京一日游勾当，帮忙他体验中国传统文化。请描写你们筹算去的处所、详细的勾当放置、和如许放置的来由。提醒词语：traditional Chinese culture, tea house, Peking Opera, paper cuttingHi, Tony!I’m glad that you will come to Beijing soon. There are lots of places of interest in Beijing. In order to experience traditional Chinese culture better, I do reco妹妹end Beijing Hutong tour.First, we’re going to go sightseeing along the lanes in Hutong. The houses in Hutong are traditional, such as Siheyuan. From them, you can imagine how people used to live. Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look. Second, we are going to pay visits to a Hutong family. We can have lunch there and have a short talk with the local residents, which can help you learn about many stories of the past. We can not only appreciate the dramatic changes that Hutong has undergone, but also see evidence of the history of Beijing, experience the old way of life and experience traditional Beijing culture.In a word, Hutongs are the homes of co妹妹on people in the past. It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days. So it is a good choice to learn about traditional Chinese culture.I’m looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua二十. 中国传统节日假设你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国的传统节日很是感乐趣。他想请你先容你最喜好的一个节日，如中秋节、端五节、春节等，你凡是是怎样庆贺的，和你喜好这个节日的缘由。请你按照他的问题复兴邮件。提醒词语：eat, get together, share, happy, specialHi! Tom,I’m glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September or October. On that day, our family members usually get together and have a nice meal. After that, I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families.I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes. They are in the shape of a full moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss.In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a day of pleasure and happiness. I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals.
